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Trough the sniffing night by SpikeTheFoxyYoshi Trough the sniffing night by SpikeTheFoxyYoshi
Spike's walking in midnight trough the park. nobody there... nobody who give care... Spike's thinking about his history he knows nothing about. A orphan who is left at Jerryt's home alone in a egg. Hatched with love and care of his father. Spike, got a disease who called ''advanced hostile adolescence'' when he got 6 months old he suddenly rapid growth and got in his puberty already when his body isn't ready on yet. A month long he lays in he's bed in hospital, pain in his whole body growing like a maniac over days. Doctors researching this new disease. when Spike was back to his good health, he and Jerryt got to know from the doctors that Spike got a body (and a brain) of a 16 years old boy. Living his life and normal days of this universe, he have to life as a 2 years old kid in a body of a 16 old boy. Spike haves to life 14 years long as a boy of 16. And I can tell you that would be a desperate time to stay so long on the same lifetime.

PS: Spike haves a allergy for dandelions cause him to swell up, so if you want to give him flowers...

Artwork and Spike (C) :iconjerryttheomegafox:
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Well, I decided do a Critique on this. Lets Start...
Vision: 4.5 Stars: It's beautiful. The colors are used well and work out in the end. It works well in this drawing right here. Great Visuals.
Originality: 5 Stars: Very original. It isn't like you see a picture like this every day. Good job for creating something original.
Technique: 4.5 Stars: His Technique is magnificent. He does very well like in most of his pictures. Quite cute and Charming I might add in that fact.
Impact: 5 Stars: This made me very sad: It was very touching and emotional. The fact that he only has 12 years left, kinda made me cry. Beautiful.
Overall: 4.75: Loved this picture Jerry, It made me cry tears, lots of them. It's beautifully well done and wish to see more of this.
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5 out of 5 deviants thought this was fair.

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ok,guys.you know...i love yoshis(yoshimaster and spike are yoshi,so,i love those)so,let's start the critique:

vision:5 stars,for the background.yeah,i guess...i like the night...
originality:5 stars,for the colours and the story.READ IN THE DESCRIPTION...sorry for my rage,but i'm some nervous.
technique: 5 stars.yeah,i love spike...but i never see him crying...he let me sad and happy.and colours....what?i do that again?aww...damn replay.
impact:5 stars...again.:iconspyperplz:yeah,i do five stars rate on every critique,i know...and you know what i mean...

count of stars: 20/20 stars.yeah.i know.that's art need 20 stars for the best creations.that art is fantastic,really fantastic.and i love it.the creator is awesome.thank you,jerryt.don't stop create arts.way to go,jerryt.
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64SuperYoshi Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Student Digital Artist
aww...i feel so bad for you spike....and yet...my life wasen't so cheery either...
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CondorGuren Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013
My god, that's really sad... Isn't there anything we can do about this?
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SpikeTheFoxyYoshi Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Student General Artist
no, very sad.
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Theaweosmeuser Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
Aww poor spike D:
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SpikeTheFoxyYoshi Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Student General Artist
Kinda sad yes but he will keep up
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CosmicYoshi Featured By Owner May 2, 2013
awwwww! don't worry Spike! You'll be ok!
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iKYLE Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I believe through this, it explains why he had such a small torso and long legs compared to that of a normal Yoshi.
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SpikeTheFoxyYoshi Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Student General Artist
good realize it :3
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ChessYoshi Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012
Careful! Out there be monsters!
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TheAwesomeUser Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
lol is that the going out of deviantart reference 
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TheYoshiMaster Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
so sad...
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SpikeTheFoxyYoshi Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Student General Artist
sniff
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TheYoshiMaster Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dont cry!!!!!
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BrownieLolz Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
I had a problem like him.
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Basher954 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
(Your art style is just getting better and better, dude!)
Aww, that's sad! Because of his disease Spike doesn't really have that much of a childhood. :( But he shouldn't think that nobody cares about him because we all care about him! :D
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SpikeTheFoxyYoshi Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Yes, I give him lot of care but the text give it more emotion and feelings.
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Basher954 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, it really does! The description really added to the picture! I must applaud you for making such an awesome description. :clap: XD
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SpikeTheFoxyYoshi Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Student General Artist
thanks, I can make good story's
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Basher954 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You definitely can! I'd love to see you make more stories with your future inflation/regular art! They're very entertaining and can sometimes add to the picture! ^_^
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SpikeTheFoxyYoshi Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Student General Artist
yes, but if I ever making story's for Ep I can't put in every Ep a inflation scene you know? around every 25 Ep will do the trick. If I do around every 5 Ep, people gonna to start a little odd when they see me show. you know what I talking about right?
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Basher954 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, I do. That definitely sounds good, because any other way could make it get redundant and unnecessary.
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SpikeTheFoxyYoshi Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Student General Artist
hehe, yep. wanna talk about something els?
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Turbo-Tails-8027 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
So he's a child in an adult body, having grown too fast? Kinda sad. But it does explain some of his choices.
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LukeTheeMewtwo Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
oh hi spike!

:3 so i herd u like flowers....

:3 does spike let people ride em?
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SpikeTheFoxyYoshi Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student General Artist
he got's no saddle so no... and I,m his father and your but stays from his back alright
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LukeTheeMewtwo Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
:iconokayfaceplz:
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SpikeTheFoxyYoshi Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student General Artist
oops sorry, I acting sometimes like me fursona but that's a way to get some emotion outa my body
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LukeTheeMewtwo Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
^^ its okay by

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