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Trough the sniffing night by SpikeTheFoxyYoshi Trough the sniffing night by SpikeTheFoxyYoshi
Spike's walking in midnight trough the park. nobody there... nobody who give care... Spike's thinking about his history he knows nothing about. A orphan who is left at Jerryt's home alone in a egg. Hatched with love and care of his father. Spike, got a disease who called ''advanced hostile adolescence'' when he got 6 months old he suddenly rapid growth and got in his puberty already when his body isn't ready on yet. A month long he lays in he's bed in hospital, pain in his whole body growing like a maniac over days. Doctors researching this new disease. when Spike was back to his good health, he and Jerryt got to know from the doctors that Spike got a body (and a brain) of a 16 years old boy. Living his life and normal days of this universe, he have to life as a 2 years old kid in a body of a 16 old boy. Spike haves to life 14 years long as a boy of 16. And I can tell you that would be a desperate time to stay so long on the same lifetime.

PS: Spike haves a allergy for dandelions cause him to swell up, so if you want to give him flowers...

Artwork and Spike (C) :iconjerryttheomegafox:
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Well, I decided do a Critique on this. Lets Start...
Vision: 4.5 Stars: It's beautiful. The colors are used well and work out in the end. It works well in this drawing right here. Great Visuals.
Originality: 5 Stars: Very original. It isn't like you see a picture like this every day. Good job for creating something original.
Technique: 4.5 Stars: His Technique is magnificent. He does very well like in most of his pictures. Quite cute and Charming I might add in that fact.
Impact: 5 Stars: This made me very sad: It was very touching and emotional. The fact that he only has 12 years left, kinda made me cry. Beautiful.
Overall: 4.75: Loved this picture Jerry, It made me cry tears, lots of them. It's beautifully well done and wish to see more of this.
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5 out of 5 deviants thought this was fair.

ok, know...i love yoshis(yoshimaster and spike are yoshi,so,i love those)so,let's start the critique:

vision:5 stars,for the background.yeah,i guess...i like the night...
originality:5 stars,for the colours and the story.READ IN THE DESCRIPTION...sorry for my rage,but i'm some nervous.
technique: 5 stars.yeah,i love spike...but i never see him crying...he let me sad and happy.and colours....what?i do that again?aww...damn replay.
impact:5 stars...again.:iconspyperplz:yeah,i do five stars rate on every critique,i know...and you know what i mean...

count of stars: 20/20 stars.yeah.i know.that's art need 20 stars for the best creations.that art is fantastic,really fantastic.and i love it.the creator is awesome.thank you,jerryt.don't stop create arts.way to go,jerryt.
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2 out of 2 deviants thought this was fair.

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64SuperYoshi Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
aww...i feel so bad for you spike....and life wasen't so cheery either...
CondorGuren Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013
My god, that's really sad... Isn't there anything we can do about this?
SpikeTheFoxyYoshi Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Student General Artist
no, very sad.
Theaweosmeuser Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
Aww poor spike D:
SpikeTheFoxyYoshi Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Student General Artist
Kinda sad yes but he will keep up
CosmicYoshi Featured By Owner May 2, 2013
awwwww! don't worry Spike! You'll be ok!
iKYLE Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I believe through this, it explains why he had such a small torso and long legs compared to that of a normal Yoshi.
SpikeTheFoxyYoshi Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Student General Artist
good realize it :3
ChessYoshi Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012
Careful! Out there be monsters!
TheAwesomeUser Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
lol is that the going out of deviantart reference 
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